Narrative Story
05/29/2020
A Campfire to Remember
My neighborhood is unlike many. Usually, you have an angry old man who scolds you when you step one foot into his property. Occasionally, you have a family with a dog who barks every minute of every day, waking you up in the middle of the night; however, I have none of that. I really have it good. To the left of my house is a family with two children that my brothers and I have been friends with since we could walk. In front of my house is a family with two daughters, one of which has autism. Her older sister takes care of her. They moved in a couple of years ago and ever since, we have been very close with them. The list goes on and on, but I will stop it there for your sake. My neighborhood has had a profound impact on my childhood. It has been the foundation of many great memories, and memories to come.
We do many things with the neighbors: movie nights, campfires, pickup basketball, you name it; well, we did. We used to be outside everyday on break going on bike rides, going out on the pond or even just lounging in the front yard, eating some freshly prepared watermelon. It was the life, but that life has been recently halted due to the coronavirus pandemic. We can no longer play board games together. We can no longer be together. We can no longer do what we used to, or so we thought.
We were all fed up. We were sick and tired of the endless hours we had to ourselves, my father especially. He decided to reach out to the neighbors through a group iMessage. After conversing for a short while, we had agreed on a Tuesday evening campfire in the Zilberberg’s backyard (the family across the street).
As we saw smoke roaring up over the house across the street, we knew it was go time. My father, the organizer of the event, came equipped with only the essentials: a wheelbarrow full of sticks, a s’mores kit, and a homemade jeopardy game (made out of cardboard). While keeping a six foot distance, we chatted and laughed the night away. My dad’s game was a hit, and it had everyone cackling over his unique categories. It was great to see everyone’s faces. After staring at pixels and isolating myself from others all day, it felt good to see a person or two, as weird as it might sound. It made me think back to when there was no pandemic; when everything was normal.
This campfire showed me that even though there is a global pandemic, we can still have fun. We can still share jokes and we can still laugh. But most importantly, it showed me that we can still be together, even when we are apart.
this was a really well written and well-read piece. I really like how you ended it. The last paragraph kind of went from small to big. You started with something small with your campfire and then you went to something that is relatable for all of us. Great writing Oliver!
Posted by: Rory Kennealy | 04/20/2020 at 11:28 AM
This was a well written piece, and the paralell structure and figuartive language made it intersting and fun to read. Having grown up on streets my whole life (a half and half split between New-Jersey and Carlisle) it was cool to see some insight into how a neighborhood like yours functions as a community, something that you described very well.
Posted by: Nick Brady | 04/20/2020 at 12:11 PM
The most important part of our yard is a camp fire pit where we often do exactly what you did in this incredibly well with the story. I love it because I grew up in the same kind of neighborhood where we figured out how to do things that engage as many people as possible. I love the little details in the story that make it come to life in a real and powerful way. Thanks for a great writing piece.
Posted by: Fitz... | 04/20/2020 at 07:20 PM
This whole pandemic has been so draining and the way you described that with the sentence: “ After staring at pixels and isolating myself from others all day, it felt good to see a person or two, as weird as it might sound.” was perfect. Spending all day on screens sounds like a blessing at first glance but the little to no interaction with anyone but your family has really been making this pandemic worse. The way you described the moments leading up to the fire were great, amazing piece!
Posted by: Max LG | 04/21/2020 at 07:13 AM
Oliver, it was clear from the first paragraph that you and your family are very appreciative of your neighbors. It’s awesome to hear that your dad set up a fun event with your neighbors, while you all were still abiding by the social distancing rules put in place. Great job, and I might have to do something like that with my neighbors also!
Posted by: Jamie Book | 04/21/2020 at 08:17 AM
Oliver, your message throughout the piece made sense and you had a very consistent and interesting theme. Your description of the seeing someone after weeks of isolation was spot on and I hope to see more amazing descriptions similar to this. The closing sentence really got the philosophical part of my brain turning... great job!
Posted by: Will | 04/21/2020 at 04:36 PM
Oliver, you did a great job expressing what your neighborhood really means to you and all the great traditions that you have had in the past. It is cool how your Dad stepped up, and made another effort for your neighbors to stay connected, even during these hard time. Great job!
Posted by: William O'Malley | 04/21/2020 at 11:59 PM
This story was really showing of your tightly knit community. It speaks levels that in the time that we are living in to be so close with your neighbors that you can organize a campfire with them. I think that you did a great job technically with your parallel structure at the end, and your pronunciation was on point.
Posted by: Yoni Ghansah | 04/22/2020 at 12:08 AM
Oliver I don’t know how your neighborhood is so chill and peaceful I most live in a completely different neighborhood because mine is the opposite. But anyways I loved how you described how your fun with your neighbors were halted and how you still had fun with them!
Posted by: Colin Soukup | 04/22/2020 at 06:50 AM