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05/04/2020
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I want to be the best. I want to beat everybody. I want to win in everything. I always want to accomplish something. I don’t want to be average. I don’t want or like to lose. I don’t want to be beaten. This attitude is what drives me to do the things I do. When I play sports, I play angry. I get pissed off that someone’s beaten me and I work hard to win.
But there’s bad things I do. I love to procrastinate. I love to put everything off until the last minute. I love to argue, and I love to be lazy. Even though my attitude towards some things is really good, I still have to fix somethings. Knowing this attitude changed my perspective towards something’s, because I know I can do better. I know I can change these habits
I care about the important stuff. I care about my habits. And I care about what I do.
This power of I describes you in the fullest of ways and I can really see that you put a lot of effort into this. Good job Will!
Posted by: Will Hatten | 05/04/2020 at 06:38 AM
Good job. I liked how you split the two main paragraphs up into good and bad things.
Posted by: Mark | 05/04/2020 at 08:10 PM
Like Mark said, I like how you split up the two paragraphs into good things and bad things. Nice job.
Posted by: Chad | 05/05/2020 at 04:31 AM
Nice! I can feel the energy in your writing style and your voice. You are the master of your ship and you can steer where you want to go.
Posted by: Fitz... | 05/06/2020 at 07:43 PM
Great job on this Will! I love how open and honest you were. I like how you stated your strengths and your weaknesses which helped round you out. Great writting!
Posted by: Sam | 05/09/2020 at 08:41 PM