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September 2018

How to Get an "A"

Publish!!!

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Always step up into a lifeboat...

 ~Fitz

 

A writing piece is never finished. It is abandoned. When you hit publish, it is an acceptance on your part that it is time to abandon the sinking ship--the essay is due, and you have done all you can to create a publishable post. It is also an announcement that you are a published author ready for the rough and tumble world of a fickle and demanding audience--an audience that will read your latest essay this weekend.

So many things can go wrong--yet so many things can go right, and so every published piece is filled with dread AND anticipation! It is all, however, part of the fun and excitement of being a writer.

As your teacher for this assignment, I have a shortlist of requirements that keep your essay at the "A" level:

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Essays are Everywhere

Say what you mean--

and mean what you say...

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Who is more to be pitied, a writer bound and gagged by policemen or one living in
perfect freedom who has nothing more to say?

Kurt Vonnegut

One of the great ironies of education is the HUGE emphasis that is put on the writing of essays--as if life without essays is unthinkable. And it actually is unthinkable as long as we live in a world of thinkers.

Yet we (us teachers) rarely assign “essay reading” to our students; instead, we have them read great poetry, and great short stories and great books--“the good stuff “that will help nurture the love for great literature... but essays? No way. Too boring. Too opinionated. Too whatever. Show me a good one that some disenchanted teenager will read and enjoy, and I’ll show you a...

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Embrace the Beast

The Rules of Punctuation

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If you don’t use it, you lose it...
~Fitz

What do you really need to learn? What teaching and what practice will help you learn what you “really need to learn” in a way that will somehow stay with you and be useful and necessary to your life.

Most all of you are pretty lucky I did not “grade” your most recent essay harshly for missing and misused punctuation, though I probably should have graded those few students who were in my class more harshly. It’s only fair. I practically beat them over the head last year with comma rules, hyphens, long dashes and semi-colons, brackets and the weird three-dot thingy. If they have forgotten, I blame myself. What kind of English teacher can’t teach what is basic and critical to good writing?

 

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From Here To There

Making an Essay Out of a Journal Entry...

 

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—George Orwell

 

      Somebody once told me that you can't make chicken salad out of chicken manure. I agree, but not wholeheartedly, for many times I find myself crafting essays out of even my most pitiful journal entries--probably because my journal is like a messy bedroom: I know what's in there, but sometimes it is hard-to-find what I need when I need it. My thoughts are scattered like dirty socks. My best ideas are somewhere under the bed, and that nifty scene about courage in the face of adversity is probably in the wash already.

But no worries, for like my bedroom--my journal is mine. Somehow I will find my best ideas, my way-cool phrasings--and even whole paragraphs that I can wear to school and call my essay.

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The Wagging Finger

Your Own Garden

(and the extended classroom)

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“You can always edit a bad page. You can't edit a blank page.”

Jodi Picoult

 

     Where does the classroom end? If it ends in school, it dies. All we learn and practice and work to do in school fades into some blurry memory of possibilities lost in the irretrievable cloud of unknowing, We have abnegated hope and make little of our lives. We need to live out a new paradigm of learning—to extend the classroom and make our lives universes of learning, to actually, deeply and truly expand above and beyond murky and distant horizons, and to grow when and where we grow best, and that, I can say with confidence, is rarely accomplished in the confines of the classroom.

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Enter the Stream

The Courageous Writer

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Time is but the stream I go fishing in...

–Henry David Thoreau, Walden
 

     Writing well requires a writer to write with courage, confidence and honesty. Your journal is your place to live fully within yourself as a real and committed writer who practices these ideals. Journal writing is simply a way to give form and substance to your inner thoughts. It is simply a way for you to be completely you—not an expectation driven by academic expectations directed and choreographed by me.

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A Slice of Life

Finding meaning in the little things...

 

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“Sometimes, little things make a big difference...”

Nino Varsimashvili

 

     Through better and worse, happy and sad, hilarious and serious, we are all wrapped up and boxed at Fenn School--so we may as well write about it. Thanks for your first efforts at posting on your blog.  After I write this, I will take a little trip of my own down Freshman Blog Boulevard and reward myself with some good reading. You should do the same! I have yet to meet a person who doesnt like a good and sincere comment left on their blog posts.

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The First Step

The First Step

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Give me six hours to chop down a tree
and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.

~Anonymous

 

     Every journey begins with a first step; in the same way, every writing piece begins with that first slurry of words that point you (as the writer) and your readers (as your audience) in a specific direction. When you get out of your car tomorrow, you will bbe faced with a choice: you either go in a clear, confident and powerful direction, or you will float aimlessly and listlessly, buffeted by winds and forces you feel are beyond your control and unsure of what to do and how to do it.

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Welcome

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It is an honor for me to be teaching the entire 9th grade. I expect a lot, but I also hope I will give a lot.

I want to give you the chance to lead a truly literate life--meaning you will be a "real" writer in every sense of the word...

I want to give you the chance to read great stories, profound poetry, amazing novels, insightful essays, and powerful journals...

I want to give the chance to share what you read and write in a safe and supportive community of classmates...

I want you to...

Tell Your Story,

Explore Your Passions,

Discover Your Voice,

& Discern Your Wisdom...

 

I want you to give a damn as much as I give a damn...

It's that easy...

And that hard...