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Epic Story Project

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    Epic stories are about transformation.  The hero is plucked from the comforts of home and called to undertake an adventurous challenge. The hero prevails and returns home transformed. It's a pretty simple formula that has obviously stood the test of time. You will never read a story or watch a movie where the main character remains unchanged; moreover, you will never have an experience "worth remembering" where you remain unchanged. You can't enter the same river twice. You are not the same person you were before you began reading this, and you are surely not the same person you will be after reading The Odyssey  It's only a matter of the degree of transformation and how you were transformed. A good personal narrative story tells the story of the human experience, but, more importantly, it tells the story of transformation.  

The hero cycle is not a rubric created for storytellers; it is the primal urge of all people, across all cultures, to experience the transformation of the hero. It is the power of hope over despair. It gives possibilities for life. It is a recognition that without agnos (pain) there is no aristos (glory), and, in that sense, it validates even the most common and hard-bitten of lives and makes every life uncommon, unique, and worthwhile.  It is not an absurd idea to recognize the greatness in our own lives. It is not absurd to think we have an epic tale worth telling, and it is certainly not absurd to examine every experience through the lens of introspection and appreciate the implications of transformation.

The hero cycle is not a rubric created for storytellers; it is the primal urge of all people—across all cultures—to experience within their own lives the transformation of being a hero.  Every ancient culture that has had its history recorded has some epic poem or story to guide its people. The heroic cycle represents the power of hope over despair; it gives us all the chance for redemption—even in the hardest of times. It is a recognition that without agnos (pain) there is no aristos (glory), and, in that sense, it validates even the most common and hard-bitten of lives by making the lives of every man, woman and child that has ever lived uncommon, unique, and worthwhile.  

It is not an absurd idea to recognize the greatness and possibilities of our own lives. It is not absurd to think we have an epic tale worth telling, and it is certainly not absurd to examine every experience through a reflective lens and to start to appreciate the implications of transformation which heroic poetry represents.  As human beings, we are hard-wired to need this epic poetry. We can’t just read the epic as a story and move on. We have to know the story and build and incorporate the allegory into our own lives; otherwise, we will run from the battles of life; we will avoid the straits of Skylla and the lair of the Cyclops; we will shun the Gods who come disguised to us and coddle the children given to us; we won’t shed tears for common friends, and we will lock out every stranger and blame our mishaps and misdeeds on the gods.  

In short, we will not be remembered, and no songs will be sung about us. The saddest part is that you may think this is all exaggeration and hyperbole. This is not true. Our lives are full of stories that use the heroic cycle. Our imaginations are even more full. 

Your epic story should follow the steps of the hero cycle! Remember that this is a guide—not a mandate, but it is a “pattern” to help guide how you tell your story. Please adopt it to suit your story, but ignore it at your peril…

Overview:

  • Write an epic poem or story that follows each step of the heroic cycle written in the poetic form (one breath per line) of The Odyssey or as a prose story.
  • It must follow The Heroic Cycle
  • Each step of the cycle should be at least 25 lines long or 750 words. The total length is up to you. 
  • You must show me updated work through the entire writing process.
  • It is probably a good idea to watch a movie that you know follows the hero cycle; plus, it might give you an excuse to watch a good movie!
  • The final story must be posted to your blog and and saved as an ePub document. You can even publish it on Apple Books if you wish!

Here are some tips for writing your epic poem:

  • Separate your poem into books or chapters. Each stage of your hero cycle should be a new book. Give each new book a unique title, for example: "Journey to the Land of the Dead." 

  • Use plenty of images and actions as you write. An image without an action is like a plough without a horse or a car without wheels. Don't just say, "She lived in a cabin." Do say, "She lived in a small one room cabin/ set in the deep valley of a verdant forest where tall green pines swayed with the endless rocking and moaning of a cold north wind…”
  • Show your hero "thinking" through a problem by writing the process your hero uses to think through a problem.  This is an excellent way to describe emotions like fear, anger, frustration, love, curiosity, etc. "Billy sat by the quiet pond and stared at the haggard reflection./ How did it come to this? How did I ever think I could slay the dragon alone/ Me? Me with puny arms and simple brain…”

  • Use Dialogue. Dialogue between characters helps to make your characters and storyline more real and engaging. Don't say, "Billy told Fred not to go downtown." Do say, "Billy grabbed Fred and threw him against the rusted chain link fence and shouted, 


"Freddie! Don't go there.
 Don't fight your battles alone.
Wait for your friends to come and stand with you!"
But Fred simply turned to Billy with a reptilian stare:
 ' Go back to the boys;' he said,
' It's time I became a man’.”

  • Use extended metaphors and similes. For example..."Will entered the room like a lion entering his lair in a lush jungle forest,
     confident and serene that he is the ruler of all he sees…”

If you find yourself getting stuck, move on to another chapter or section of your story. And go back to your stuck place when you are in a different frame of mind.

My best piece of advice is to follow the KISS rule: Keep it simple, stupid! Keep characters to a minimum. Stay focused on a clear plot.

Writing is hard work. Writing a book is even harder work. Use the time given to you in wise and diligent ways. Most good books are the product of sweat, not genius!

 

 

 

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