Day of the Week
Daily Journal #2

Daily journal #1

I wake up, but I can’t move 

This must mean that it’s time for school

My body is telling me to wake up, but my eyelids are heavier than ever

I roll my self out of bed as my covers fall with me 

I throw on some clothes and get on zoom

Wishing I was still in my room 

First period was very boring

To the point where I was close to snoring 

Zoom was lagging, so I couldn’t learn 

The phone is starting to burn 

Because it is so hot on my cold legs 

After I sit through the long, but quick classes I try to relax myself, so I get on Fortnite 

And after some wins the time is just before night 

But before the night starts I remembered my daily run I have been doing for soccer 

It is raining which is not a shocker 

After my run through the cold rain 

All of my energy I all down the drain

And my day is slowly coming to a end.

 

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The Fenn Voice

You certainly have the heart and soul and skill of a poet. This might be better broken up into some stanzas, but I do like it the way it is: raw and real with some clever tricks with words and rhymes.

Drew Callen

This was a nice poem, and I really liked how the first and last line were my personal favorite.

Drew Callen

This was a nice poem, and I really liked how the first and last line were my personal favorite.

Chad

Great poem. I really liked the first 2 lines of the poem that you used I relate to that. The poem also flowed really nicely. Good job.

Kevin Yuan

Great poem. I like how you put rhymes in the poem.

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