Daily journal #1
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Daily Journal #2

I wake up to the sun shining into my room

I look outside and the flowers are about to bloom

The outdoors looks warm and welcoming, but so does my bed

Kinda hungry, I may want some bread

But I can’t walk downstairs because my legs are feeling dead 

After going on my phone for a bit and taking a shower I'm ready for my day

But I’m probably going to have to stay 

Because of quarantine 

I have to sit Behind screen

I decide to go outside after being stuck inside with nothing to do

The sky today is looking very blue 

Decided to play some basketball 

But then I got a call

It’s two of my friends saying to play Fortnite 

So I walk downstairs to get on 

I see it’s turning into dawn 

My friends and I are playing some squads

Were playing like gods 

We died a couple times and decided to go to sleep

This is when my day slowly drifts away

This is all I had to say.

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The Fenn Voice

Putting a day into a poem is a wonderful way to capture the images and your thoughts in a compelling way. I also really like the twist at the end. Nice job.

Drew Callen

The last line was good, and the poem overall had a humorous tone. Nice job on all of the rhymes too.

Will Hatten

I like the ryes throughout the poem it really adds to it in a special way. Ps I love the last line.

Kevin Yuan

I like the humorous tone throughout the piece. I like how you always start to do something, but then you decide to do something else instead.

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