The power of I
04/28/2020
I want a world where I can multitask and be successful. Where I can succeed without stress tearing at my walls everyday. I want my friends to be happy and successful just on the same stride as me. I want them to know that if they need something they can count to me for it. I don’t want to fall out with anyone that I know and have a friendship with.
I like this a lot, its relatable. I especially like the first line. I too would love a world where I could multitask and be succsesful.
Posted by: Sam | 04/29/2020 at 06:44 AM
I really liked this blog post because it was quick and simple, but it put a great message across. Nice job.
Posted by: Finn hudson | 05/01/2020 at 08:35 PM
I really liked this because it was very fast to read but also put a great message in the writing. Nice job.
Posted by: Chad | 05/03/2020 at 01:46 PM
This was a very brief but good writing piece. You got your point across well and clear. Good job
Posted by: Drew Callen | 05/03/2020 at 02:51 PM
Wow, short and simple but has a strong and powerful message. Great piece.
Posted by: Andrew Crofton | 05/03/2020 at 06:32 PM
Nice writing. I like how concise, yet how impactful it is.
Posted by: Kevin Yuan | 05/03/2020 at 06:44 PM
This piece is very relatable, and I think that this story has a powerful message in it. I like how it wasn’t too long, but it had a lot in it, and this piece was very well written.
Posted by: Jack Doherty | 05/04/2020 at 05:57 AM
In this short piece I really got the theme, you really made it stick out through the entire piece. Great job Garret.
Posted by: Will Hatten | 05/04/2020 at 06:49 AM
Like what everyone else wrote here, although it was short, it was still good. I especially liked the second sentence.
Posted by: Mark | 05/05/2020 at 06:58 AM