Writing Piece The Poem Of Reckoning
A solitary walk

The power of I

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I want a world where I can multitask and be successful. Where I can succeed without stress tearing at my walls everyday. I want my friends to be happy and successful just on the same stride as me. I want them to know that if they need something they can count to me for it. I don’t want to fall out with anyone that I know and have a friendship with.

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Sam

I like this a lot, its relatable. I especially like the first line. I too would love a world where I could multitask and be succsesful.

Finn hudson

I really liked this blog post because it was quick and simple, but it put a great message across. Nice job.

Chad

I really liked this because it was very fast to read but also put a great message in the writing. Nice job.

Drew Callen

This was a very brief but good writing piece. You got your point across well and clear. Good job

Andrew Crofton

Wow, short and simple but has a strong and powerful message. Great piece.

Kevin Yuan

Nice writing. I like how concise, yet how impactful it is.

Jack Doherty

This piece is very relatable, and I think that this story has a powerful message in it. I like how it wasn’t too long, but it had a lot in it, and this piece was very well written.

Will Hatten

In this short piece I really got the theme, you really made it stick out through the entire piece. Great job Garret.

Mark

Like what everyone else wrote here, although it was short, it was still good. I especially liked the second sentence.

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