A solitary walk
05/10/2020
Through the tree swept cold roads I walked. The wind a sad reminder that winter is gone. The soft chirps of birds slowly whirling around me in a sea of noise. The quietness of a community that used to be so loud and exciting saddened me. I then began to think to the past to football when the air was flying past my face like a jet flying past the sound barrier. I was happy that in a few weeks I wouldn’t have to have zoom calls everyday. I would however be nervous and sad about all my friends that are leaving to go to different schools.
Great piece Garret, I liked the second sentence and it was perfectly describing the air.
Posted by: Will Hatten | 05/10/2020 at 02:15 PM
Very brief yet powerful paragraph on the beauty of nature. Great job
Posted by: Drew Callen | 05/10/2020 at 03:24 PM
Wow, this price is simple but brings a lot of emotion, I can’t say that I am that sad about winter leaving but it was fun.
Posted by: Andrew Crofton | 05/10/2020 at 06:11 PM
Great job. The writing is very short, yet it has a lot of impact.
Posted by: Kevin Yuan | 05/10/2020 at 07:00 PM
Good job. I really liked the simile relating the football and the jet.
Posted by: Mark | 05/10/2020 at 07:35 PM