The power of I
My year

A solitary walk

Through the tree swept cold roads I walked. The wind a sad reminder that winter is gone. The soft chirps of birds slowly whirling around me in a sea of noise. The quietness of a community that used to be so loud and exciting saddened me. I then began to think to the past to football when the air was flying past my face like a jet flying past the sound barrier. I was happy that in a few weeks I wouldn’t have to have zoom calls everyday. I would however be nervous and sad about all my friends that are leaving to go to different schools. 

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Will Hatten

Great piece Garret, I liked the second sentence and it was perfectly describing the air.

Drew Callen

Very brief yet powerful paragraph on the beauty of nature. Great job

Andrew Crofton

Wow, this price is simple but brings a lot of emotion, I can’t say that I am that sad about winter leaving but it was fun.

Kevin Yuan

Great job. The writing is very short, yet it has a lot of impact.

Mark

Good job. I really liked the simile relating the football and the jet.

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