Haiku
04/26/2020
The same faces
The same house
Changing world
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The same faces
The same house
Changing world
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this was a great haiku. It was simple and I really liked it. It is really relatable to the times that we are in now and you represented that well. Great writing!
Posted by: Rory Kennealy | 04/27/2020 at 08:00 AM
You capture everything perfectly in 10 syllables. Thank you! (maybe a long dash after "house." It's the "kigu" the cutting indicator in haiku)
Posted by: Fitz... | 04/27/2020 at 07:44 PM
also--I love a brief meta under the poem, though I know everyone knows the context.
Posted by: Fitz... | 04/27/2020 at 07:45 PM