Power of friendship
11/04/2019
The power of friendship
Without friends we would be lost in this world or gray
A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out
Good friends are always there, even in the darkest times. When my cousin died my friend Becan was there for me right away. When my cousin died I was extremely sad and down but my friend helped me cheer up. When April died I was shocked, she was three years old when she got hit by a car in Florida. At the time I was in Hawaii for my mom's work. When I found out I Immediately went to Becan for help. At the time I didn't know that his cousin had just died to but when I got home he forgot about his own sadness and helped me with mine. When I was in my hotel room in Hawaii I was trapped. I couldn't really good to anyone for help. When I got home my friend picked me right back up. I have no idea what I would do without him in this world. Without friends we would be lost in this world or gray and sadness.
It must be very sad for you for a family member who is young to suddenly pass, good essay
Posted by: Drew Callen | 11/04/2019 at 05:55 AM
I’m sorry for your loss, great job continuing and repeating your theme throughout the paragraph.
Posted by: Gabriel | 11/04/2019 at 11:43 AM
I’m sorry for your loss, I’m glad your friends were there to support you
Posted by: Finn hudson | 11/04/2019 at 02:16 PM
I’m sorry for your loss,It’s great your friend could pick you up
Posted by: Chad Bartlett | 11/05/2019 at 04:12 AM
I’m sorry for your loss, it was a nice essay.
Posted by: Sam | 11/05/2019 at 07:19 AM
Nice essay. I liked how you included the connection between you and your friend, who had also lost his cousin.
Posted by: Mark | 11/05/2019 at 07:52 AM
I loved how you referred to your relationship with your friend that went through the same experience.
Posted by: Will Hatten | 11/05/2019 at 08:41 AM
I liked how you referred to your friend that went through the same experience.
Posted by: Willie Belle | 11/05/2019 at 09:03 AM
That must have been really sad and it take courage to write about something tragic happening like that great writing!
Posted by: Rory Kennealy | 11/05/2019 at 03:32 PM
“Those who are happiest are those who do the most for others.” -Booker T. Washington
When your friend helped you, not only did you feel better, but he probably did too. Excellent writing.
Posted by: Max Troiano | 11/05/2019 at 04:59 PM
I’m sorry for your loss, but I’m glad that you had a friend that you could lean on. Good job 👍
Posted by: Dereck Then | 11/06/2019 at 04:30 AM