Power of respect
12/20/2019
Power of respect
Respect everyone
Respect others and become respected. In life, if I hadn't respected who I did, I wouldn't be where I am. If I hadn't respected all the teachers or principals that yelled at me or I was just annoyed at, there is no way I would be hear today with so many connections. Back at Curtis Middle School in 2016 my idiotic 11 year old brain thought it would be a good idea to draw on the bathroom walls. Nothing inopropriot, just 11 year old kid drawings. I got caught and had to talk with the principal. The principal yelled at me and threatened to suspend me. You could see how angry she was just by how she stared at you. You need to respect everyone you come across even if you hate or really don't like them. You never know who they know and who they have connections with. respect everyone even your enemies.
Really good piece, I liked your setup and head and heart it really sets it up and finishes it well.
Posted by: Will Hatten | 12/20/2019 at 06:32 AM
I like your conclusion. I really agree with “respect everyone even your enemies” because that is what respect is all about.
Posted by: Dereck Then | 12/20/2019 at 06:35 AM
Sounds like something I would do too, but otherwise good lesson on respecting your teachers.
Posted by: Drew Callen | 12/20/2019 at 06:37 AM
I really liked your description of the principal’s anger. However, I kind of wish that you had wrote a bit more on what happened after the principle yelled at you, and how it changed you. Anyway, good job.
Posted by: Mark | 12/20/2019 at 06:38 AM
I liked your example and how you incorporated your own dumb decisions in the story. There are some spelling errors, so next time just read it over a bit more carefully.
Posted by: Willie Belle | 12/20/2019 at 06:38 AM
I like how you talk to the reader as if they were directly in front of you. This is a great story, very clear and concise. There are some small grammar mistakes, but otherwise a great writing piece.
Posted by: Kevin Yuan | 12/20/2019 at 06:40 AM
Nice job, I like how you described how you and the teacher felt. You did a good job writing, I liked reading this.
Posted by: Jack Doherty | 12/20/2019 at 06:41 AM
This story was well written and thought out. There were a few grammar mistakes but still was a great story. The smoking gun was the best part in my opinion because you created a scene that led to a great story. Well done
Posted by: Chad | 12/20/2019 at 06:44 AM