Iambic Poems
02/28/2019
The Promised Land
The dunes of sand (a)
The waves of blue (b)
The promised land (a)
A new debut (b)
Hand and hand(c)
The treasure we seek d)
We walked the land (c)
And was so sweet (d)
Creating this ballad was a beneficial experience which I enjoyed. I was able to generate ideas with a group of focused peers. We generated ideas and gave feedback to each other. During the process of creating my poem I used my resources and rhymed the words with rhyme zone. In conclusion, this was a beneficial process and I’m excited to create more ballads and learn new ones.
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The King
The first great king (a)
Oh dunes of sand (b)
His strong sword swing (a)
Oh grand grass land (b)
We wish him luck (c)
He will find it (d)
No not awestruck (c)
The holy writ (d)
Creating this ballad was a very difficult process. I had trouble deciding what the theme of my ballad should be, unlike my most recently written ballad above. So I decided after some thought that it would be about a king finding the holy grit (sacred writings). My writing process was long and there were frequent trips to the website rhyme zone. Many times during the process of writing this ballad I would delete and rewrite sentences to figure out which I liked and sounded the best. I focused on the emotions of a crowd cheering on their king through writing my ballad and attempted to weave them throughout it. In conclusion, my writing process was long and difficult but in the end, I’m happy with the ballad.