Murdough Topical Essay
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Murdough Topical Essay

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The current drug policies aren’t working, it's time to change.
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“The decriminalization of drug use needs to be considered as a core element in any public health strategy”

~Alexander Murdough

There are approximately 1.2 emergency visits to the hospital, and approximately 25,000 deaths annually due to gang violence in the United States. According to the U.S. Department of Justice, drug trafficking, drug manufacturing, and drug disputes are some of the main causes of gang violence. Simply legalizing drugs stops unnecessary violence, the current drug system doesn’t work, and forcing ideology onto people doesn’t work.

     As of now, there is too much crime and violence related to illegal drugs; however, there is a solution. Legalizing all these drugs. Yes legalizing drugs could result in higher amounts of drug use, but it would undeniably stop the unnecessary assaults, unnecessary homicides, and unnecessary drug scandals because everyone can simply go to a store, buy their drugs, avoid any gang involvement or sketchy situations, and simply go do their own thing. Since there would be no need to commit any sort of violence or scam, the amount of people going to the ER would drop, the number of assaults would drop, and the number of homicides would drop. Surely it is worth risking higher amounts of drug use in exchange for fewer deaths and injuries caused by drugs being illegal. Right now, statistics have shown that drug abusers commit crimes to obtain their desired drug. If one of these drug abusers could simply walk into a store and buy their drugs, they wouldn’t feel the need to go out and steal or assault in order to acquire what they want. Instead of being ignorant and stubborn, it is time to be practical and reasoning.

     The same drug policies have been in place for 50 years; not only has drug use increased, but it has also created an enormous drug market. The drug market is one of the main stems of violence and corruption, and the reason that the drug market exists is because drugs became illegal, which forced the drug dealers and users to adapt. Since it is illegal the places and people doing these drug deals are mostly sketchy, and in many cases there are weapons or firearms present. When doing something illegal, everyone gets edgy and tensions usually get high. Add weapons to high tensions, illegal drugs, and often gangs, that is a recipe for disaster; however this disaster is fixable. If drugs were legal, the environment where they are purchased and sold wouldn’t be hostile or sketchy, there wouldn’t be weapons, and it would be legal! It doesn't take a person with much intelligence to understand that legalizing drugs has more pros than cons.


     Humans are by nature independent creatures. Each of us have our own opinions, own needs, and own problems. No one enjoys being forced into anything, or being forced to not do something. So when the government makes drugs illegal, the citizens of the U.S. feel like  some of their freedom is taken away, we want our freedom back and respond by doing what we were told not to. If the government were to legalize drugs, no one would feel the need to try to gain their freedom back by taking these illegal drugs. There are also cases where other countries have legalized drugs. According to Open Society Foundations, in Portugal, the use and possession of all drugs were decriminalized in 2001. Since then, drug use has remained under the EU average, and there was also a “huge drop in drug-related HIV transmission.” Legalization of drugs has worked in Portugal. Why wouldn’t it work in the United States? 

     In what way have the current drug policies helped anyone?

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Justin

Great essay, Alex. I’ve got to admit, at first I was skeptical of the idea to legalize drugs, but as I continued to read it started to make more sense. You said, “The same drug policies have been in place for 50 years.” Which to me seems wrong because the world and certainly the drug world has changed in those fifty years. This is a topic that I was not to educated on and you helped me see both sides of the argument. Keep up the good work.

Pete

Alexander, I thought your essay did a super good job at persuading the reader to believe in your side of the argument for legalizing drug use. I especially appreciated how much you used evidence from outside source and all the insertion quotes you used made your essay seem much more credible.

Amir

Alexander, I thought this essay gave a great overview on why Drugs should be legalized. Less illegal activity which would cause less gang violence is a great example why drugs should be legalized. This would cause less ER cases and would make selling drugs less violent. Good Job!

Aiden LaCamera

I really liked your essay. You made some strong points and I 100% agree with the argument. You persuaded me and showed me why drugs should become legal. You used really great diction and word choices. Super job.

Luke

Great job Alexander! This was a thorough and powerful essay. Before reading this essay, I was on the other side of this argument, but after reading your argument, I am no longer sure which side to choose. This essay was very persuasive and effective. You did a great job of using your own voice, but also incorporating some facts. Great job!

Matt

Your essay was very intersting for me. Before reading I knew nothing about drug problems and didn’t relize it was such a big deal. But now I Agree with you. Drugs should be legal andd the people that get addicted thats your problem. But this would help violence go down by a lot which is what we want. Great job Murdy!

Thomas

Nice job Murdy! I never really thought of this topic that deeply. I liked how you used numbers to reinforce your core points. Throughout this essay you showed me how there are two sides to this discussion. Awesome job!

Jack

Great job murdy. Ive never really thought about this topic before and this essay helped me get a better understanding of it. I really enjoyed your intro and how you used a fact to help with the idea. I also like your small but impactful conclusion and it left me thinking.

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