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The Magic of Childhood and How to Describe It

 

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Themes and techniques in A Child’s Christmas in Wales

“Memories of childhood were the dreams that stayed with you after you woke.” 

~Julian Barnes

Soft, frozen raindrops flutter down like confetti, filling the fields and streets with blankets of frost. Christmas time returns again, the joy returns slowly, gradually building with the excitement of the holidays. Christmas is an important time for anyone, young or old. In A Child’s Christmas in Wales, the author, Dylan Thomas, recollects his experiences as a child around Christmas time. His hazy, yet clear memories weave the story into a stream of childhood joy that he experienced. It captures two major themes in the short story, the joy of memory and the wonder of childhood and describes them in distinct and interesting sentences.

 

Memory can be a powerful thing. It’s a tool that can transport us back years into crystal clear moments or experiences in a time when you weren’t yet you. Thomas explores his memories throughout the short story; he goes back to when he was a child, curious and happy. At the very beginning of the book he opens with the fact that he’s writing about exploring his mind for memories of the holidays. “One Christmas was so much like another, in those years around the sea-town corner... In goes my hand into that wool-white, bell-tongued ball of holidays resting on the rim of the carol-singing sea.” [A Child’s Christmas in Wales,  Page 1, Paragraph 1-2]. The Christmas’s blend together when looking back. Memories are vivid, yet foggy when you truly take the time to look back at them. But they are important, they bring us the joy we had in the past and help us realize our future. Thomas uses metaphors to help us imagine what memory is like and what it means, but the most important part of memory is that it’s personal. A memory is something you and you alone can experience, and that makes it so much better. Taking a glimpse at the past can be refreshing, a chance to understand how far we’ve come and be thankful for the past and the present. Memories of childhood are especially sweet, because it takes us back to a simpler time.

The other major theme of the story was the innocence of childhood. Christmas is a special time for kids. The joy of presents, the bright lights all around, the ever familiar sparkling tunes of holiday classics can bring so much emotion to someone yet to have experienced it a hundred times. “we were outside our house; the front room was lovely; balloons floated under the hot-water-bottle-gulping gas; everything was good again and shone over the town.” [A Child’s Christmas in Wales, Page 16, Paragraph 2]. Having returned from an adventure, Thomas finally gets to take in the marvel of his house. Everything being good again is the perfect way to express being a child. Thomas doesn’t just experience the warm light of home and the jovial atmosphere of Christmas, he experiences bliss. Things don’t come in experiences, they come in emotion. When you’re a kid, everything seems black and white, happy and sad. Emotions drive your experience, it’s not what happened, it’s how it happened. That’s what makes childhood unique.

However, what makes A Child’s Christmas in Wales stand out from other writing pieces is it’s way of describing all that happens. When writing about childhood, it takes attention to detail to capture what that truly is. Thomas uses certain writing techniques to capture the way things appear to his younger self. Recalling on one memory, Thomas describes him and his friend looking for cats to throw snowballs at: “the lynx-eyed hunters, Jim and I, fur-capped and moccasined trappers from Hudson Bay” Thomas uses a metaphor to show the imagination of a child. Even though he and his friend aren’t fur-capped trappers from Hudson Bay, he still conveys the child-like imagination he used to have. Not only does it show imagination, it also shows how the character are moving. You can easily imagine the children creeping along, laying hidden in the snow, extremely conspicuous. The way Thomas describes the scene in just this short sentence gives the reader a clear view of what’s happening. The clear description is what gives the reader a sense of childhood. The themes are important to the story, but what makes the themes are the writing.

Memory and childhood are the backbones of A Child’s Christmas in Wales. They show us how to reflect on our past, on a time when we were more innocent. The personal experience of the author and the way he describes it makes you feel connected to everything that happens. The magic of childhood is brought to life, just like childhood is. 

 

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Gerald

Owen, your lines are beautiful, and the word use is great. ”Christmas time returned again, but the joy returns slowly”. This is one of the high light of your essay. Of course, the last sentence ”the magic of childhood is brought to life, just as the childhood is” is perfect. Great work!

Gerald

The essay specifically catch the ”the power of tradition” though using time and family actions. The vocabulary use is wonderful. Good work!

Jack Moskow

Owen this was a beautifully written great job. Owen throughout your essay you offered clear points and your piece has a clear structure through your writing which made it essay to understand. I loved it when you said, “Everything being good again is the perfect way to express being a child.” This point contributed wonderfully to the analysis of innocence in your writing! This was a pleasure to read well done.

Ben Cook

Owen this piece was really good. You used great parallel structure. i could see throughout the whole piece that you were getting at the points of childhood imagination and how Thomas wrote his story which made it different from all the others. The only thing I have that isn’t really that important and is just from my perspective is that maybe you should put your quotes into block form; it just makes the piece a little better and the quote jumps out at the reader a little more. Other than that your piece was outstanding.

Hudson

Owen, you open in it with a nice scene that sets a key foundation for the rest of the piece to build on. Your last sentance of your opening sets the theme up, for your reader to induldge in. You also talk about the use of the sentance building teqniques. You bring up great points and explain theme expertly. In the end you are able to wrap everything up in a thoughful way. Keep writing like this and you are sure to do well in whatever English class you take!

Connor

Your theme of childhood innocence is not one that I’ve seen so far and is very interesting to see you write about it. I like the approach you took on this assignment and it is different and very interesting to read. After reading so many child’s Christmas in Wales paragraphs, your’s stuck out.

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