The Power of Community
11/14/2021
Community and the place it has in our lives
“He who masters the power formed by a group of people working together has within his grasp one of the greatest powers known to man.”
~Idowu Koyenikan
Community is one of the best ways to feel supported. The boys at my camp made me feel like I was part of a community more than ever before. Throughout the year I go about doing whatever I want until the summer, when for the last five years I have returned to camp Kabeyun.
During my years at camp many people have welcomed me back and I have done the same to new campers. At camp I have found my place in the trips program with hikers. Year after year the same kids come back with the oldest kids leaving and new younger kids joining our community.
Certain trips tighten the bond between the core group of hikers. Sitting in the camp van with a bunch of tired boys after a 22 mile hike across the Presidential Range, I had never felt closer with anyone else. We talked quietly about our grueling experience but we did not have to talk, we could just look at each other and know what the other person was thinking because we know each other so well from spending a summer together.
The presidential traverse was the culmination of my summer. When I was sitting in the van after the hike I realized how close we had become, almost like brothers. The greatest part of the small community we formed was we were always willing to bring people into our community.
The connection I made with the boys at camp Kabeyun will never be broken, even if we can't see each other in person.
Great job Pete! This essay was well written and fun to read. You did a great job explaining how close you are with your friends at camp. I really liked the line, "We talked quietly about our grueling experience but we did not have to talk, we could just look at each other and know what the other person was thinking..". It was very powerful and a great way to convey the brotherly bond between you and your friends. Great essay!
Posted by: Luke | 11/14/2021 at 05:24 PM
Nice Job Pete I really enjoyed reading your essay and it made me connect to the power of brotherhood and I liked relate to your essay with my experience at camp. I liked reading your perspective on how camp has such a powerfully community.
Posted by: Aiden | 11/15/2021 at 09:17 AM
Awesome job Pete! I really liked reading about your theme of brotherhood. I also really liked your conclusion it was super strong. Overall superb job on your essay!
Posted by: Thomas | 11/15/2021 at 04:05 PM