Journal Entry #2
09/25/2019
My Opinion On Fitz
Another free write. Do I have to find another boring story that I extend, so I write for 15 excruciating minutes? The structured journal entries are the ones I liked. These need creativity, which Is sometimes hard. I guess I have already started this entry, so I am doing a self aware entry! I think il talk about Fitz today, even though he is the one skimming through this garbled mess (Hi Fitz!). I just write like he doesn’t know me.
My opinion on Fitz is that he is real. He knows much more about the world then I do, so I guess I look at him for wisdom. I love his quotes. Also his blunt facts that will hurt. “No one cares about you.” He is probably going to write in the comment box “Great writing!” It’s nice, but it seems too nice. Almost he’s like “This kids writing is crap. Il say nice stuff so he feels good about himself.” It probably is true I guess. He is overall pretty nice. Wow. That’s more writing than my last journal entrie. I tend to write more when I like the topic. For example, my 2nd entrie was 1100 words, and took me around 25 minutes. It is because I like explaining the dumb, specific rules of pool.
One new thing that Fitz is doing I really like. It’s where he lets us submit all of our homework assignments on Sunday, so we can plan out our homework. Times almost up. I know that I can write longer than 15ish minutes, but I got a lot more homework. I’m a little worried about my Spanish quiz. It’s on chapter 4 verbs. Even though I learned the same thing and even more last year, I forgot most of it. I hope I do well. I have been studying for a while each day. I don’t really think I need a conclusion on these things, but might as well make one. Fitz is a cool guy. Maybe even the coolest. Maybe next free write I’ll write about video games.
Great writing:)
Posted by: Fitz | 09/25/2019 at 08:53 PM
That said, I love this. It is what the freedom of words can create. You do need t format it as a journal entry--and fix the formatting: the text is centered, not aligned to the left.
Posted by: Fitz | 09/25/2019 at 08:55 PM
I liked our descriptive writing
Posted by: Max | 09/27/2019 at 11:40 AM
I also like the fact that Fitz lets us submit our stuff on Sunday
Posted by: Max | 09/27/2019 at 11:43 AM
I like how you say that you are extending your writing as you extend your writing. We really get a sense as to what is on your mind. Good Job!
Posted by: Yoni Ghansah | 09/29/2019 at 10:42 PM
I like your honesty and descriptive language while writing. Nice work Eli.
Posted by: Dylan | 09/30/2019 at 09:10 AM
This was really cool and funny. The first paragraph made me feel as if you were talking right in front of me.
Posted by: Sean leahy | 10/10/2019 at 05:05 PM
Also the conclusion is really funny
Posted by: Sean Leahy | 10/10/2019 at 05:08 PM